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6 Common mistakes to avoid in an elevator pitch

An elevator pitch is a brief and persuasive speech that is used to spark interest in a person, idea, product, or service. It is called an "elevator pitch" because it should be brief enough to be delivered in the time it takes to ride an elevator.
January 7, 2023

In today's fast-paced business world, the ability to clearly and effectively communicate your value proposition in a short amount of time is more important than ever. However, crafting a compelling elevator pitch is not always easy. In this article, we will highlight some common mistakes that people make in an elevator pitch and how to avoid them.

An elevator pitch is a brief and persuasive speech that is used to spark interest in a person, idea, product, or service. It is called an "elevator pitch" because it should be brief enough to be delivered in the time it takes to ride an elevator.

Mistake #1: Talking too much

Solution: Stick to under 2 minutes

One of the most common mistakes that people make in an elevator pitch is talking too much. This can be detrimental because it can overwhelm the listener, make it difficult for them to understand your main message, and make it harder for them to remember you and your message later on.

To avoid talking too much, keep your elevator pitch concise and to-the-point. Identify the most important information that you need to communicate and focus on that. It is also a good idea to practice your elevator pitch ahead of time so that you can be sure that you are able to convey your message in a limited amount of time.

Mistake #2: Failing to clearly state your value proposition

Solution: Keep it simple, stupid (KISS)

Another common mistake that people make in an elevator pitch is failing to clearly state their value proposition. Your value proposition is the unique benefit or solution that your product, service, or idea provides to the customer. It is what sets you apart from your competition and is the main reason that people should be interested in what you have to offer.

To avoid this mistake, make sure that your value proposition is clear and easy to understand. Use simple language that your audience will understand, and make sure that it is prominently featured in your elevator pitch.

Bonus tip:
Using jargon or industry-specific terms: Another common mistake that people make in an elevator pitch is using jargon or industry-specific terms that the audience is not familiar with. This can make it difficult for the audience to understand the message and can make it harder for them to connect with the pitch. It's important to use simple, everyday language that the audience can easily understand and relate to.

Mistake #3: Not having a clear structure

Solution: Use the PAS or AIDA format

Not having a clear structure to the pitch can make it difficult for the listener to follow along and can make it harder for them to remember the pitch later on. A clear structure can help the listener understand the main message and key points. A structure can help to organize your thoughts, keep your pitch concise and easy to follow.

A good way to structure an elevator pitch is using the "problem-agitate-solve" (PAS) format. This format is a three-part structure that starts by highlighting a problem that the audience can relate to, followed by agitating that problem and showing how it affects them, and finally, by presenting a clear solution that addresses the problem.

Another way to structure an elevator pitch is by following the simple acronym AIDA: Attention, Interest, Desire, and Action. AIDA helps to create a clear flow of ideas and guides the listener through the process of being interested, developing a desire and taking action.

Mistake #4: Not tailoring your pitch to your audience

Solution: Do your homework

It is important to understand and cater to your audience when crafting your elevator pitch. Not tailoring your pitch to your audience can make it difficult for them to connect with you and understand your message.

To avoid this mistake, do your research to understand your audience and what they are looking for. Tailor your message and language to match their needs, wants and desires. It's also important to understand their pain points and try to address them in your pitch. Also, anticipate and address any potential objections that your audience may have.

Mistake #5: Lack of enthusiasm or confidence

Solution: Add some humour or stats

Lack of enthusiasm or confidence can negatively impact an elevator pitch, making it less effective and less memorable. If you don't show confidence in yourself and your message, it will be harder for others to believe in it as well.

To avoid this mistake, be passionate about your message and practice your pitch so you feel confident delivering it. Use powerful and confident body language, and make sure to make eye contact with your audience. Also, try to be familiar with your subject matter to help increase your confidence.

Mistake #6: Not having a call to action

Solution: Ask and you shall receive

An elevator pitch should not only generate interest, but it should also lead to action. Not including a call to action can make it difficult for your audience to take the next step and make it more difficult for you to achieve your desired outcome.

To avoid this mistake, be sure to include a clear and specific call to action in your elevator pitch. This could be something as simple as asking for a follow-up meeting or encouraging your audience to visit your website.

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